mht5050 发表于 2021-7-24 19:26   全显示 1楼
迷奸题材特色就在于过程和另类，毕竟踩点下药到完全睡着这个过程都是很刺激很兴奋的，文中对于这块交代的不是很清楚并且入室迷奸说实话这块很出戏，感觉很轻松了。不过睡着以后的处理还是挺有意思的。写了凌辱羞耻的内容，迷奸才能把这种情绪凸显出来。楼主可以尝试加一些内心后悔的戏份，毕竟完事以后的后怕还有担心这种才是迷奸最常有的心态。当然要是作为快枪手文，爽就够了。
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