cblcyf11603 发表于 2013-7-3 09:26   全显示 1楼
非常喜欢龙大的文章，上一篇“公安局长的熟妇情缘”就一直追看着，后来突然停更草草结局，感觉很遗憾！这次龙大另起一篇仍然看好你，也会一直支持！从本文开局来看有点虐心文的感觉，虐心文一定要把握度，要虐心到位，但结局应该是反虐心的，也就是说让男主角有报仇雪恨，反身做主人的情节！套用一个现在很流行的词“逆袭”，充分写出白羽的“逆袭”的过程和结局。另外，非常认同作者的观点：性奴没有暧昧更刺激！暧昧，暧昧，再暧昧！
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